Dear sincerely,I hope this e-mail finds you well.It’s my honor to recommend myself to you.I graduated from Sichuan International Study University, majoring in International trade. I’ve passed TEM(test for English major)-4 and TEM-6. I can communicate with the clients freely via e-mail, telphone, ect , and have the experience of entertainning business guests. I know well about the English documents..I have been in the field of foreign business for nearly 2 years. I am familiar with the business process: developping customers, discussing the payment, placing an order, making documents, delivering goods, etc. I even know a little of accountant’s work. I attended some trade fair as well. I sold various products in different industry such as machinery, hardware. I have developed some customers in Europe, North America, Middle East and South East Asia by the great effort I’ve made.China is the leading country in the industry of texitile. There are always enormous requirments in domestic as well as foreign market. And Shengze enjoys it’s good name “the capital of silk”, due the perfect place it located.I am full of ennery. I am a person of wide interests,and have the sense of team spirit (I was in charge of the Dep. of propagande when I was in University,and as the leader of the basketbal team, we got the third place in the competition). I am capable of learning, and can understand the texitile products very fast. So I hope that I could have the opportunity to join your company. I believe I will be a professional in this industry some time, and bring benefit to your company through hard-working.Waiting for your favorable reply.Tks for your cooperation.

Dear Sirs or Madam,
I hope this e-mail finds you well.It’s my honor to recommend myself to you.I graduated from Sichuan International Study University, majoring in International trade. I’ve passed CET 4(College English Test, Band 4)and TEM-6 (College English Test, Band 6). I can communicate with the clients freely via e-mail, telphone, ect , and have the experience of entertainning business guests. I know well about the English documents..I have been in the field of foreign business for nearly 2 years. I am familiar with the business process: 1. marketing, 2. busines negociation, 3. placing  orders, 4. making documents, 5. delivering goods, etc. I even know a little about accountant’s work. And I attended some trade fairs as well. I sold various products in different industry such as machinery, hardware. I have developed some customers in Europe, North America, Middle East and South East Asia with the great effort I’ve made.China is the leading country in the textile industry. There are always enormous requirments in domestic as well as foreign market. And Shengze enjoys it’s good name “the capital of silk”, due to the perfect place it locates.I am full of ennery. I am a person of wide interests,and have the sense of team spirit (I was in charge of the Dep. of propagande when I was in University, and as the leader of the basketbal team, we got the third place in the competition). I am capable of learning, and can absorb the professional knowledge of  the texitile products very fast. So I hope that I could have the opportunity to join your company. I believe I will be a professional employee in this industry some time, and bring benefit to your company through hard-working.Waiting for your favorable reply.Tks for your cooperation.

上面我只是简单的将一些小的语汇做了修改,但依俺之见,最好是把逻辑顺序整理一下,整体感觉条理性不太好啊.这是英语简历的大禁喽!

Dear Mr/Ms,I hope the e-mail can make you well.It recommend myself to you.I graduated from Sichuan International Study University,my major is International trading. I passed cet-4 and cet-6. I can communicate with the clients well and have  more experience in entertainning businessman. I know  the English documents well..I have been in the field of foreign business for  2 years. I am familiar with the business processing:such as developping customers, discussing the payment, placing an order, making documents, delivering goods, etc. I also know  accounting. I attended some trade fair as well. I sold some of products in different industry such as machinery, hardware. I have developed some customers from Europe, North America, Middle East and South East Asia .China is one of the leading country in the industry of texitile.
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There're too many "I" The last sentence"Tks for your cooperation",I think it's a little improper.

Kid English.Let people tell that this is a letter from an illiterate one.