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[交流体会] [原创]考研英语写作练习(不断の更新ing)

[原创]考研英语写作练习(不断の更新ing)

今天看了英语真题,才发现自己的英语其实已经烂到可以的地步了,很多单词想写都不会写了,写作一点感觉都没,感觉很别扭,所以,为了督促自己进步,开此贴.尝利用上班的时间尝试写作,相信一定会有进步的.
非常欢迎大家能给予批评指正,非常感谢!
2001年真题
Section V: Writing76.
Directions:

Among all the worthy feelings of mankind, love is probably the noblest, but everyone has his/her own understanding of it.
There has been a discussion recently on the issue in a newspaper. Write an essay to the newspaper to
1) show your understanding of the symbolic meaning of the picture below,
2) give a specific example, and
3) give your suggestion as to the best way to show love.
You should write about 200 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)

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The picture below tell us a thing :Love is just like a lamp,it will be brighter when the circumstance is darker,and I think it really was.Love always enlightens us when we are in hesitation or desperation,Love is the most noble feelings of humankind.
And in our socialist society ,love is more important and should be enhanced,for instance,about three or four years ago,there is a kind of plague in our country ,which was call Sars at that time,it was unfortunately spreaded all over the country and everybody is nervous and upset,yet there are some kind of people ,those angelic nurses and doctors,they always keep in closest touch with those patients and even though they may be infected at any minitue ,but nothing daunted ,they fighted at the very front and rescued a many many peoples’ lives.They did not leave there position just because there lives were threatened and may die,and I think ,it’ a kind of ture love .
Since love is such a kind of noble feelings,then how can we show it properly ?I think the easiest and best way is to be eager to offer a hand when other people need our help,keep a gratituded heart to the whole world and do not concern much about of our own benefits when it is necessary.I suppose with the whole world overflowed with love,the world should be better.

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2002年
Section IV: Writing66.
Directions:

Study the following picture carefully and write an essay entitled “Cultures -- National and International”.
In the essay you should
1) describe the picture and interpret its meaning, and
2) give your comment on the phenomenon.
You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)

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In the given picture we can see a pretty western girl wearing traditional Chinese costume,and smile of happiness shining on her young face.
Maybe you would feel a little bit supprised ,yet indeed a western girl in Chinese traditional costume is not strange thing in nowadays ,and sometimes we can see a foreigner play Chinese KongFu very well,or a Chinese boy with dyed blonde hair ,wear Nike shoes ,and do something just like a American boy do .
   All these things above show us a phenomenon which is called Globalization.
With the development of Science and technology ,we can go anywhere we want to go ,and talk to anybody we are about to talk at any moment,So I think globalization is a inevitable outcome.First of all,I think golabalization is a absoutely good phenomenon ,because it helps people from different counties learn from each other on many fields including science ,culture and maybe other things,so that humanbeings can make progress easily ,yet as we benefit from globalization, one thing should not be neglected: we young people should never forsake our own culture ,because those precious culture left for us by ancestors is always things to be proud of ,and be cherished.
   So learn from the world ,and let the world learn from us ,that is our responsibility.

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2003Section IV: Writing66.
Directions:

Study the following set o f drawings carefully and write an essay in which you should
1) describe the set of drawings, Interpret its meaning, and
2) point out its implications in our life.
You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)


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In the pictures above ,we can see that a flower can grow vigorously in a glasshouse ,but when it is put outside,the flower withers in wind and rain.A flower grow up in mild and gentle circumstance can never survive in bad weather, and this phenomenon may give us a notice:we ourselves as humanbeings,especially the yonger generation,should also be like this flower on this point.
        Childs grow up under totally protection will easily fall in frustration and desperation once  they come across setbacks, and they don’t know how to handle with, sometimes this may lead to disastrous outcomes.Most of the successful man had sufferd a lot when they were not successful,Just like the lyrics goes:how can we see rainbow,if we didn’t go through a heavy storm?
        So I think ,for me ,the meaning of the picture is : We should choose to be a wild flower but not a cultivated one.We should try to be independent and handle with more complicated situations by ourselves.Whenever there is setbacks ,we should face it objectively and forge ahead despite difficulites,Only in this way ,can we be a real man.

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